tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post116286670495732069..comments2024-01-16T17:40:13.951-05:00Comments on Somewhere in NJ: Stolen glances - a Haibun for one deep breathLauraHinNJhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08329387562570495570noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1163241976820022612006-11-11T05:46:00.000-05:002006-11-11T05:46:00.000-05:00This is a real treat. Such a good balance with the...This is a real treat. Such a good balance with the photo, text and haiku!Andromeda Jazmonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12355192738014962965noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1163133382636840962006-11-09T23:36:00.000-05:002006-11-09T23:36:00.000-05:00Thanks again.Maryann: Not sure what is up with the...Thanks again.<BR/><BR/>Maryann: Not sure what is up with the photos not loading - does the same to me sometimes.LauraHinNJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08329387562570495570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1163028835427671532006-11-08T18:33:00.000-05:002006-11-08T18:33:00.000-05:00wow...what a debut! wonderful haibun and lovely ph...wow...what a debut! wonderful haibun and lovely photograph...and i would have to agree having lived in NJ for 11 years (a lifetime ago)...that looks more like PA (or south Jersey....after all, it IS the Garden State :-)<BR/><BR/>welcome to ODB...so glad to have you join us and hope you come backsusanlavonnehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02579948528761683764noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1163021108594266662006-11-08T16:25:00.000-05:002006-11-08T16:25:00.000-05:00Beautiful photo - lovely haibun! I thank all of yo...Beautiful photo - lovely haibun! I thank all of you who are bringing back to me memories of autumn in the east.Pam in Tucsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10030449989883826414noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162996280383368122006-11-08T09:31:00.000-05:002006-11-08T09:31:00.000-05:00That's lovely, Laura. Your photos haven't been sh...That's lovely, Laura. <BR/><BR/>Your photos haven't been showing up for me the past couple of days. But from the words I have a clear mental image of your picture. I'm eager to see if it matches the actual photo, if the actual photos ever show up.<BR/><BR/>I was out taking pictures in the country Monday, too. I'll post some eventurally.Mary Annhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00236910059228402369noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162958240739294522006-11-07T22:57:00.000-05:002006-11-07T22:57:00.000-05:00Thanks everyone for being so kind.;-)Thanks everyone for being so kind.<BR/><BR/>;-)LauraHinNJhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08329387562570495570noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162955945595033262006-11-07T22:19:00.000-05:002006-11-07T22:19:00.000-05:00I love your poem, Laura. The way you worded the s...I love your poem, Laura. The way you worded the second line caused me to pause and feel it. Your photographs are stunning too (love the barrens post--had trouble with Blogger leaving a comment yesterday), as always. :)Lené Garyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10018280698586741856noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162952731078488422006-11-07T21:25:00.000-05:002006-11-07T21:25:00.000-05:00Very nice Laura, and that picture glows! November...Very nice Laura, and that picture glows! November in Minnesota is gray, gray and more gray!Lynne at Hasty Brookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09187035706322695138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162926656518381102006-11-07T14:10:00.000-05:002006-11-07T14:10:00.000-05:00Both the scene and your telling of it are lovely. ...Both the scene and your telling of it are lovely. A bit of warmth for a cold grey day here (where it is supposed to be late spring)Catherinehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08236329216260906624noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162915603355104192006-11-07T11:06:00.000-05:002006-11-07T11:06:00.000-05:00Lovely haibun, so evocative of the season.Lovely haibun, so evocative of the season.paris parfaithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05457437124988976587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162912848455431542006-11-07T10:20:00.000-05:002006-11-07T10:20:00.000-05:00Bravo! You ARE a poet and didn't know it. HA!Bravo! You ARE a poet and didn't know it. HA!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02040099513110890878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162911165619531542006-11-07T09:52:00.000-05:002006-11-07T09:52:00.000-05:00That's a beautiful poem. I think making poetry is ...That's a beautiful poem. I think making poetry is good for the soul.Madcaphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08966173518099250557noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162905130884931152006-11-07T08:12:00.000-05:002006-11-07T08:12:00.000-05:00Never say you're not a poet! You are!! Lovely wo...Never say you're not a poet! You are!! Lovely work!jzrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05938966640494785871noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162904747173362852006-11-07T08:05:00.000-05:002006-11-07T08:05:00.000-05:00Works for me!Works for me!Susan Gets Nativehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00216170589750418861noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162899262424340442006-11-07T06:34:00.000-05:002006-11-07T06:34:00.000-05:00Great first attempt,Laura! I love that photo, can ...Great first attempt,Laura! I love that photo, can you believe I miss fall already, now that Maine is taking the look of winter?<BR/>So glad to see you here! You have the eyes and pen of a poet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162889078694461922006-11-07T03:44:00.000-05:002006-11-07T03:44:00.000-05:00Beautiful haibun and photo.Beautiful haibun and photo.Crafty Green Poethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02486633917197181851noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162884483203990602006-11-07T02:28:00.000-05:002006-11-07T02:28:00.000-05:00This is serenely wonderful. You did what wanted to...This is serenely wonderful. You did what wanted to.silverlighthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01849509928715939847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162876465424879482006-11-07T00:14:00.000-05:002006-11-07T00:14:00.000-05:00The photo is beautiful. New Jersey has such hidden...The photo is beautiful. New Jersey has such hidden treasures. I love the phrase "autumn at my feet."Jonehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04299647754479967070noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162871959287877612006-11-06T22:59:00.000-05:002006-11-06T22:59:00.000-05:00What an absolute treat--the photo is breathtaking,...What an absolute treat--the photo is breathtaking, like a wondrous painting in its color and detail. Haibun is new to me; as a sometime poet, I shall have to try it.KGMomhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05165941950953938943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-18784445.post-1162868251060131712006-11-06T21:57:00.000-05:002006-11-06T21:57:00.000-05:00I would say you are a poet. Lovely photo and verse...I would say you are a poet. Lovely photo and verse.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com